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WEEKEND WITH THE FAMILY

I and my family went to Pattaya, Chonburi last weekend. We stayed at the hotel, 2 days 1 night. Our family would like to relax at the sea. First of all, I went to the beach, I played volleyball with new friend. My father went to sauna room. My mother went to shopping mall with my sister. After I finished volleyball playing, I went to swim with my sister. My parent stayed with me at the swimming pool. We had dinner at the restaurant beside the sea. I played online game with my friend before sleeping. The next day, I and my sister swam at the swimming pool again before we check out the hotel. The last, we bought souvenir before go back home. I felt relax and fun.

3 thoughts on “WEEKEND WITH THE FAMILY

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